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The painful truth of death
Can be so beautiful
It’s more common than life itself
Purely inevitable

There is no angel of death
That will come for my soul
The beauty of a suicide
Comes from your own control

The selfishness of humans
Is no reason to shy
For if you wish to opt out
It’s your own choice to die

Your mother will weep
Your lover will cry
They’ll point at the heavens
And shout and ask why

But the sky has no answers
Your prayers are all lies
There’s no one to answer
Your pathetic cries

I sit alone crying
It’s dark and I’m bleeding
My death is my aim
And it seems I’m succeeding

Fear of death cannot save me
Nor any love of life
All the love in the world
Cannot stop my own knife

I swallow mortality
I know I am ending
I know now all my living
Was just me pretending
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MarrissatheAuthor Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Utterly amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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WritingInTheDark Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Writer
Oh, thank you. Giggle 
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student General Artist
whoa...this is gorgeous...i love it!!!!<3

thank you awesome writer person for writing this so well. ^-^
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WritingInTheDark Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Writer
Aww thank you so much! :D Sorry for the very late reply, I've been busy with the schoolings.
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SpazTomato Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I felt like this at one point and something pulled me away from it. I don't know what but whatever it was it stopped me. And so I am still here.
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DarkLover33 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013   Writer
wow... beautiful... sad and true....
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WritingInTheDark Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Writer
Oh, thank you. :)
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DarkLover33 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013   Writer
Your welcome :)
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Flower7052 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
this is so beautiful, it just flows perfectly!
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WritingInTheDark Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Writer
Oh, thank you so much. :giggle:
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